Season 1, Episode 19: “Second Motherhood” as Reviewed By That Pretentious Guy in Your MFA Workshop
So first, I wanna say, I can tell you really put a lot of work into it. There’s some really interesting stuff here. But I have a lot of questions? Firstly, why would this rich man fall in love with Blanche if she pretends not to care about his money?And the part where we’re told she spends the day with his kids? I think you need to show that, not just tell. Although the decision to not accept his hand in marriage because she doesn’t want to be a mother to his kids recalls a modern take on Edith Whartonian tropes.
However, the other characters, Dorothy and Rose, seemed a little flat. You might want to round them out a little more? Rose had nothing to say except strange stories from the farm and Dorothy just seemed angry all the time. What were you going for having the two women…
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